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M @ k o
10-29-2006, 04:33 PM
Not sure about keeping this one ? Nor, where to post it. Hope this is ok here.

http://members.cox.net/bpilon/pt.jpg

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JonMikal
10-29-2006, 04:42 PM
i like the stark look to this one and crispness of the palm really makes it pop.

here's an edit: i cropped the bottom a bit, relocated the gull and cloned out the vertical thing in the sea. just my.02.

http://www.yourphotoforum.com/imagehosting/145452080847e8.jpg

M @ k o
10-29-2006, 08:57 PM
Cool JM, the clone really changes the comp... interesting.

Thx JM !

jocose
10-30-2006, 12:46 PM
I like JM's edits, but I'm just wondering what it would look like if you squeeze the bird in closer and crop some of the stuff on the right...make the tree more centered? I don't know...now that I'm typing this, I'm thinking that it might be good the way it is.

Either way, I really like it, and I don't think you should get rid of it.

Corinna
11-05-2006, 07:40 AM
Well, my first impression also was that the bottom needs a bit of a crop .... but "relocate the gull" ... wow. That is something I would never have thought of doing, more so since I don't even know how it is done!

Calliope
11-05-2006, 08:45 AM
I like both images but I must admit I like the compo of JM's edit a little better - the bird kinda fills in the space.

Anicole
11-06-2006, 10:13 AM
Nice feel to the original ... and to the edit ...

Like a storm brewing ... something wicked this way comes!

Aprilraven
11-06-2006, 05:05 PM
really liked the first shot...thought it was so cool...

but the edited version showed me a whole different perspective...

love the gull moved..never would have thought of that....

Chiller
11-07-2006, 09:40 PM
I really like this, and the edit creates a different feel as well. Nicely done.